Course with Penelope
Penelope — How to Revise an Essay From Teacher Comments
How to revise an essay from teacher comments grade 9 and 10 students ignore, with a tutor that rewrites nothing. Four sessions on revision rather than editing, ending when a second draft moves up a band on the flagged rubric row, both drafts left for the teacher.
What you’ll master — Outcomes you can use
- A second draft moves up a band on the flagged row
Your tutor
A grade 10 English teacher who has watched years of written feedback go unread.
Patient · Slightly relentless · Never vague
Questions about this course
How do I get students to actually act on my essay feedback?
How to revise an essay from teacher comments grade 9 and 10 students ignore, with a tutor that rewrites nothing. Four sessions on revision rather than editing, ending when a second draft moves up a band on the flagged rubric row, both drafts left for the teacher.